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Tuesday, 30 June 2015

Once upon a time there lived a poor widow who had an only son named Jack. She was very poor, for times had been hard, and Jack was too young to work. Almost all the furniture in the little cottage had been sold to buy bread, until at last there was nothing left worth selling, but the good cow, Milky White, who remained throughout the years, and she gave the most tastiest milk every morning. But one sad day Milky White produced no milk, and then things started to look bad indeed.


His mother said to him  “Go sell Milky White at the market. She is no use for us no more”. She waited and waited for Jack’s arrival. He had returned with some worthless beans. Jack tried to convince his mother that these beans are no ordinary beans they are magic beans. Of course his mother didn’t believe him. His mother was furious, she threw the beans out the window. “Cheer up mother” said Jack.


The next morning, Emma, his mother woke up to find Jack no where to be found. She was worried out of her mind. She cried her eyes out sitting at home that she had not noticed the beanstalk outside.


Later that day she heard a knock on the door. She was so relieved that Jack was back. He carried a bag in his hand. “What is that?” she asked. “Mother I have some food” he replied. She wondered where he had got it from. But she was to hungry to argue. She had a splendid dinner that day.


The day after she asked him where he had got it from. Jack told her about the adventure he had with the giants. His mother was so pleased that they would have enough to eat now. Then she told him   to go and get some more and when she heard him say that the giant counted his money every day she told him to go get some of that money. He has so much he wouldn’t mind to share some of that gold  she said to herself trying not to feel guilty. That day he went up the beanstalk and his mother did the housework as she waited. When Jack came back his mother was gleeful.


The next day he let himself in, now his wife did not like Jack anymore and she was determined to find him and cook him for lunch for her beloved husband. Her husband was very angry. He was very protective of his money. So the giant climbed out of the beanstalk to find Jack. When Jack saw the giant coming down the stalk he immediately rushed to cut it down. He succeeded and the beanstalk fell across the land.


I  was proud of my dear son for saving the lives of the villagers. We were able to take the giant to the museum with the money we had and now he was an ancient artifact. Jack and I lived happily ever after.


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This is my writing about Jack and the beanstalk. We wrote in a different perspective (Point of view). I have written my story on the mothers perspective.

Monday, 22 June 2015

Re-Telling Sleeping Beauty


Sleeping Beauty...

In a land far far away, there lived a King and a Queen. They were so happy they held a feast for their beautiful baby daughter, Aurora. The entire kingdom was invited, family, friends and the fairies. Everybody was happily enjoying the feast, while the thirteenth fairy was sitting at home moaning. The fairies gathered around the precious daughter of the king and queen to give their blessings. Once it the eleventh fairy finished giving her gift to the gorgeous baby girl.

The the thirteenth fairy arrived she was raging with anger she asked to give her gift to the splendid daughter. Instead of giving a gift it was more like a curse. She said “On her fifteenth birthday she will prick her finger on a spinning wheel and die”. The twelfth fairy said she had not giving her gift yet, she was their only hope. She was not strong enough to remove the curse but at least she could make it better her gift was of life, instead of dying the princess will fall asleep for a hundred years.

Soon the princess was grown up. In fact the princess had no clue that there was a curse. Her fifteenth birthday was not far in fact it was a day away. Once her birthday was finally here she wanted to explore the kingdom.

She found a tower where she had never been before. She walked up and up and finally she found a door which was unlocked, there was an old lady sitting there using the spindle. The princess had asked if she could use it. When she started a second later she had pricked her finger. She had fainted on the floor.

The old lady happens to be the 13th fairy. The 12th fairy soon figures out that the princess had gone to the tower. But she was too late the curse had begun. So she had used up her magic so that everyone will fall asleep with the princess, so when she wakes up everyone will be with her and she won't be lonely.

The only way the curse can be stopped is if she meets her true love. The 13th fairy does not want this to happen so she cast a spell so there is magical thorns around the castle. Many princes had heard about this and they came but none made it through the thorns. One day a prince in a far away kingdom hears about this and he comes to save her. He awakens her with a kiss. The rest of the kingdom woke up. A few months they got married and they lived happily ever after.

The End

This is my narrative writing. This is a retelling of Sleeping Beauty.

Wednesday, 17 June 2015

My Mihi

This is my recording of my mihi. This is about me and my family and where I come from. My mihi introduces me. This was our first time we made an audio. This is the link to listen.

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